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Post by thegreyman on Apr 7, 2010 18:29:18 GMT -5
Prior to the past couple of weeks I'd been in sort of an aimless state in the ACW, both in character and out of it. Now with Yeh Ren and the Toxic Melody I've gotten a bit of purpose. I can't speak for Yeh Ren, or anybody in the Toxic Melody, but with all the extracurricular work being put into these feuds I'd like to get feedback here and there as things progress. I'm considering also using this thread to collect the various relevant posts for posterity.
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Post by Michaelina Summers on Apr 7, 2010 18:47:01 GMT -5
Honestly, I think the feuds are a great thing for Gone. I can completely see John Gone overshadowing Snake as far as the most evil wrestler on the roster.
A lot of sunshine is about to light up your sphincter here but hell, I think he has the true mark of a madman and you haven't compromised him one bit in any situation he has been put in. He is still the calculating, malicious man, and yet he gets what he wants and takes a lot of damn pleasure in it.
The feuds that he has around him have really put him into a good place and I always enjoy reading what comes of it.
All I can say is, keep playing him like he is. I truly enjoy the villain that he is and now with purpose he's likely going to blaze forward.
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Post by aurorajansen on Apr 7, 2010 21:41:04 GMT -5
Personally I've enjoyed the little vid packages you've put together towards these two things.
I can't quit messing with the one you did for the Raining Blood Main Event, I don't mind admitting.
Its the details which bring so much to the rest, those little underpinnings that boost up the actual feud just as much as the promos themselves, so kudos to you on that.
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Post by yehren on Apr 7, 2010 21:58:42 GMT -5
Can't really leave feedback for the writing type stuff, but the videos are good. The song in the Raining Blood package sounds really familiar, what's it from?
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Post by hyena on Apr 8, 2010 2:17:41 GMT -5
John Gone has a lot of viciousness. Enough to draw the attention of the Cerberus. Be warned.  |
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Post by thegreyman on Apr 8, 2010 2:44:57 GMT -5
Ren: The song is Devendra Banhart's Insect Eyes. A different verse was used in that great teaser trailer for the Hills Have Eyes 2.
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Post by Mike Voland on Apr 8, 2010 17:40:19 GMT -5
I'm not sure what to say other than Gone is one creepy motherf*cker, and I mean that in the best possible way. After our match a while ago I still keep thinking of Gone and "The King in Yellow" simultaneously because the two seem a very fitting match (I'm pretty sure that was the idea for mentioning it in the one promo).
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Post by thegreyman on Apr 29, 2010 0:49:12 GMT -5
The story so far... Chapter 1: I Started a Joke "In Tiny Rented Rooms I Was Struck by Miracles" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=2958"Distant Camera" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=3115"Chilled to the Bone" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3145"Thank Heaven For Little Girls" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3148"No Surprises" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3154"Well Aquainted with the Dark" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3158Aurora Matthews vs. John Gone americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW030710.htm"Picture in a Frame" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3217John Gone vs. Yeh Ren americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW031410.htmChapter 2: Things Fall Apart "This Is Just Foreplay." acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3280"It Starts Tomorrow" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3283"No More Threats" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3285"No More Games" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3288"Maybe Tomorrow" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3289Eric Donovan and Obsession vs. Yeh Ren, John Gone, and Kaylyn Vaude americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW032110.htm"Quick Question for a Tag Partner" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=3291"The Devil's Scripture" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3303"Defiance: Whatever it Takes" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3311"Day of Deliberation" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3322"Ignorant Little Soldiers" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3323"Eternal Flame" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3326"Priority" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3328"Between Vengence and Darkness" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3332"Just a Mirage" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3334"Natural Selection" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3335"This is What it Comes Down To" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3337"All Falls Down" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3338DEFIANCE: The Toxic Melody vs. John Gone and Sarah's Army americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/PPV032810.htmChapter 3: Bad Attraction "The Wolf in Madrid" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3369"The Matter in Madrid" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3371"Try" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=3373"Vocea Experienţa" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3374"Suddenly" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3383"In Spite of Me" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=3387Aurora Matthews and Devon Mayhem vs. Yeh Ren and Michalena Summers americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW040410.htm"Bar Fight" parts I-III acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3406Yeh Ren vs. John Gone, no disqualification americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW041110.htmChapter 4: May be a Price to Pay Backstage confrontation between Yeh Ren and John Gone americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW041810.htm"Safe" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3502"Choices/The Eternal Trinity" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3506"You Are the Blood" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3508"The Flight/Comparisons" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3510RAINING BLOOD: Snake vs. John Gone vs. Yeh Ren, Caged Treasures match americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/PPV042510.htmlChapter 5: A Game of You "The Food is Not the Lunch" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3576John Gone vs. Johnny Blaze, and altercation between John Gone and Eric Donovan americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW050210.htmlJohn Gone vs. Dusty Spears, and altercation between John Gone and Eric Donovan americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW050910.html"By the way, Eric" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=3582&page=1Altercation between John Gone, Aurelei Jamison, and Eric Donovan americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW051610.html"A Little Girl Lost in the Woods" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=3609&page=1Chapter 6: Some Rise By Sin "The Honeymoon is Over" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3627"The Cautionary Tale of Yeh Ren and Kagrra" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cd&action=display&thread=3633Backstage altercation betweeen Yeh Ren and John Gone americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/SW052310.html"A Brilliant Mistake" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3648"Ballad of a Thin Man" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3662"Furnace Room Lullaby" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3670"The Underdog" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3673"Happiness" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3676"1,000 Words" acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=roleplaying&action=display&thread=3681Promotional video acwmessboards.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=news&action=display&thread=3685TRIAL BY HONOUR: John Gone vs. Yeh Ren, mask vs. Kagrra americanchampionshipwrestling.webs.com/PPV053010.html |
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Post by thegreyman on May 24, 2010 20:38:34 GMT -5
Chapter list updated.
Also, I think one of the things I like most about the story is how everybody else kept trying to warn Ren about Gone.
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Post by thegreyman on Jun 19, 2010 1:17:30 GMT -5
Chapter six added.
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