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Post by person on Dec 18, 2010 15:12:58 GMT -5
My first RP in some time and my first RP ever as a Caw. Probably sucked but that's just me
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Post by The Fallen Angel on Dec 18, 2010 16:25:31 GMT -5
It did not suck at all. The discription in the middle was nicely done. i liked the way it was split into three acts, thats unique. My advice, would be make each of the three acts longer. Your lenght score for this RP would be very low.
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Post by devonmayhem on Dec 18, 2010 22:29:43 GMT -5
Really for a first original created wrestler promo it wasn't bad at all. You'll get into the swing of things, I get the feeling once you get on your feet as far as deciding the direction your character is going.
Something will click for you and off you'll go. At least, that worked for me. ;D
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