Post by imbest on Dec 19, 2010 22:50:52 GMT -5
I figured with the holiday break coming up that I'd chuck this out there. Ian Malcolm Best... he's morphed a lot; both in personality and presentation. My question to you all is how can I make your experience of reading my writing better?
Am I coherent? This is a tricky question to answer, so I'll divulge a couple of my strategies in RP:
Given those technical details, what do you think?
Also, is it interesting? Does it make you want to read it, or is it just a duty-read? I want to find that harmony between my creative needs being met and the reader's desire not to have their time wasted. Rest assured that Ian will NOT go on a psycho binge and trying to do the ridiculous or illegal (subjectively). I understand the limits of "reality" when it applies to e-feds, so just give it a chance. I have a plan.
I felt compelled to return to e-feds by my desire to work out the kinks in my literal delivery. In as such, the main motivating force behind Ian's "rebirth" is based in the series, Dexter. The wife and I have been watching the Showtime series again and the fifth book came out in September. It's definitely a novel approach to a CAW, but do you care? If not, what would make it better?
On a side note, I believe my argumentative side is ready (I'm a lot more familiar with people now), so if your suggestions are to improve my point/counterpoint or attacking monologue, duly noted.
Am I coherent? This is a tricky question to answer, so I'll divulge a couple of my strategies in RP:
- Foreshadowing - RP needs to have a transitional purpose as well as competitive. Nothing thrills me more that when I read a RP that makes me excited to see where it's going on SW or a PPV. I try to include it in every RP.
- Perspective - I trying to build tension with the Passenger and Ian. Is the Passenger a real entity or is Ian crazy? So, I have to shift perspectives a lot. That can be confusing, but it's essential to keeping my interest.
- Formatting - I've been playing with the format of my RPs since I came to ACW. My favorite formatting styles to date are the RP I posted for the Mayhem/Best at FF and the latest CD. Aesthetics are important to me in this aspect because it's available to use... just need to find that "one".
Given those technical details, what do you think?
Also, is it interesting? Does it make you want to read it, or is it just a duty-read? I want to find that harmony between my creative needs being met and the reader's desire not to have their time wasted. Rest assured that Ian will NOT go on a psycho binge and trying to do the ridiculous or illegal (subjectively). I understand the limits of "reality" when it applies to e-feds, so just give it a chance. I have a plan.
I felt compelled to return to e-feds by my desire to work out the kinks in my literal delivery. In as such, the main motivating force behind Ian's "rebirth" is based in the series, Dexter. The wife and I have been watching the Showtime series again and the fifth book came out in September. It's definitely a novel approach to a CAW, but do you care? If not, what would make it better?
On a side note, I believe my argumentative side is ready (I'm a lot more familiar with people now), so if your suggestions are to improve my point/counterpoint or attacking monologue, duly noted.