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Post by Eris on Apr 16, 2011 20:00:22 GMT -5
Hiya all! Was hoping those who read my two promos this week would be able to help and give suggestions to improve as well as what everyone thinks of the promos and Eris so far.
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Post by The Fallen Angel on Apr 16, 2011 21:04:24 GMT -5
The Roleplays were good. I think the best advice i can give is don't stand back and think that you have a match won no matter what, becuase sooner or later you will lose and you may even lose a couple and then you get frustrated and end up leaving.
We have had a few people recently leave becuase they couldn't handle a loss when they felt they won.
As far as the actual RP, i would say it needs to be a bit longer. You can add more of a story being told with the setting and description and add more dialog to the whole.
As far as the character is concerned, the similarities between her and Dahlia are striking. The look is one thing, but the speech and childlike behavior. i would say change the behavior and speech becuase Dahlia got hers from a very tragic past, it's not something she can control.
That's my two sense.
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Post by Eris on Apr 16, 2011 22:13:05 GMT -5
As far as the character is concerned, the similarities between her and Dahlia are striking. The look is one thing, but the speech and childlike behavior. i would say change the behavior and speech becuase Dahlia got hers from a very tragic past, it's not something she can control.
Actually there a reason of why she talks like that and she talked like that before decided bringing her to ACW. There reason and such which eventually will be pulled out from her on screen or not. Only two people in ACW know when she speaks like that right or at least the basics of why.
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