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Post by drewstevenson on Jun 22, 2011 1:11:41 GMT -5
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Post by dahlia on Jun 22, 2011 10:18:56 GMT -5
Since you've got more than one roleplay to mess with this week - its a PPV and no special imposed 'less than max' limit, what you did isn't a 'mistake' so to speak but you focused wholly on David Caid's promo and neglected to address Derryk, and Jeff Purse...that can be costly, as its a good idea to keep in mind that David isn't the only man in the match.
Interesting though, that you used the Emperor imagery to counter his sort of 'gladiator' style tactic.
Length as well might be something you work on... the length criteria for judging isn't just how long a promo is, but how well you use it too. But if you put up a quality two page promo and your opponent/s does a quality four page promo, this can become a disadvantage when it can easily be avoided.
Good luck!
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Post by Heather Miller on Jun 22, 2011 12:30:35 GMT -5
Like stated above, try not to forget everyone involved in the match. You never want to not focus on someone. Other then that it was a great read. Within time the length will pick up as well. [/font]
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