Please. :)

[drewstevenson]

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I had a lot of fun typing this, I really like it and would love your thoughts - good or bad.

[Ashley Harris]

Getting better. Once more, enjoyed the read, and you took advice and added your other opponents in as well. That alone brought out some more length for you. Keep it up. Like I said, the more you write, the better the length will start to come to you over time. <3 [/font]

[David Caid]

Very good read. I like the style and I like some of the detail. Hope to see more of whats to come