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Post by Jeff Purse on Jun 25, 2011 14:36:35 GMT -5
At first I was like, no I don't. But now I do. On the PPV Roleplays I have posted. I feel like they don't have enough Umph to them, like they are missing something. I can't put my finger on it. Anyway, any feedback would be very welcome and appreciated!
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Post by Lola O'Neal on Jun 25, 2011 15:05:09 GMT -5
I think you're doing a good job..
You could use a little bit more description in your scenes, maybe a few more scenes throughout the promo as well. Don't be afraid to let us see and feel what the people are actually doing.
Otherwise, its pretty good as it is.
Keep up the good work and just have fun..
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