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Post by Jeff Purse on Jul 9, 2011 15:35:43 GMT -5
So, I have been in feds before, but this is the first time I have ever been Jeff Purse, and the first time I have been a face. I usually go for the heel posistion because, well, I have a good heel character. But I wanted to try something new. I feel as though my promos are lacking something, has anyone read the here we go again promo I posted? If so, I would LOVE feedback. Like I said I feel like I am just...missing something...
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Post by Aaron Lawrence on Jul 9, 2011 15:46:40 GMT -5
What does it feel like you're missing? Do you think it isn't long enough? Not entertaining? Do you feel you aren't getting your point across?
Always remember that the key is to have fun. From personal experience I find that when I'm having fun and enjoying the writing process my work is a lot better and sometimes it's easier to take when losses come. Try not to take your work too seriously.
Once I've had a chance to read some of your work, hopefully I can give a little better advice.
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Post by Jeff Purse on Jul 9, 2011 15:49:33 GMT -5
You know, its not that I don't have fun, cause I do, and its nice being like a face, because I can be funny. Maybe the problem is that I have never played face before, I usually play a creepy shitzophrenic dude, and perhaps its just not what I am used to so it seems to be missing something? Maybe. And thanks I appreciate it.
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Post by Aaron Lawrence on Jul 9, 2011 15:55:14 GMT -5
For some people, playing a character that's a grand opposite from what they are in real life is what works for them, both in eFeds and in professional wrestling as a whole. Then there are some who try to play their wrestlers as they themselves are in real life and that works best.
Aaron is a huge face and most people who know me will tell you that that's me as a person. But I enjoy having a heel character too because whenever I'm all angry I can just unleash it on his opponents and have fun, something I can't do with Aaron.
So far, I'd say you're doing well. Just be patient with yourself and read as many ACW promos as possible. It lets you keep in mind what's going on so you can apply that to your work and some of the people around here are good examples to learn from.
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