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Post by Ernie K on Jul 12, 2011 19:31:21 GMT -5
Just looking for some feedback. It's always a bit tough to get started RPing, with a lack of history, no way of talking about the past, so I know this one is a bit short.
Looking for two things: do you get the feel of the characters, how they balance the other? And how it fits into the style of this particular fed. I know some places want straight promos, others want you to tell stories and work the promos in anyway you can...
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Post by meganharris on Jul 12, 2011 20:48:03 GMT -5
Hello... well that's really not a bad first promo I have to say. The big thing is length, its a little short but that's the kind of thing that comes with time.
Interesting to see the differences between Ernie and Tessa as well, its not 'over done' so to speak. As far as 'styles' we have a wide variety of styles, it never hurts to take a look at promos on the board, see the match results and what won that week too. See who is successful and why, so to speak. There are a few to always watch out for and modesty prevents me from saying who. =D
As far as what ACW looks for... how you present your promo is up to you. Tell a story, do a straight promo or a blend... look at the list of judging criteria and you'll see there's room for both.
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Post by Jeff Purse on Jul 12, 2011 22:00:03 GMT -5
I actually enjoyed reading it. I didn't think the length was that off because of you going first, if you post another I would say length. But it was a good read, you really play both characters well.
I think this match is going to be good, I hope. hahaha. look forward to rping more with ya!
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