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Jul 22, 2011 14:31:02 GMT -5
Post by Jeff Purse on Jul 22, 2011 14:31:02 GMT -5
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Jul 23, 2011 13:29:36 GMT -5
Post by Cole Blaze on Jul 23, 2011 13:29:36 GMT -5
being your advasary this week Jeff the only advice that i can give is that when you write something like this, putting yourself into a situation that could possibly give your opponent a chance to RP something with you in it isnt the best idea in the world, for example You came to Coles gym, you got out of the car and left it at that, it opens the door to me ( your opponent this week ) to take that where you left off and run with it, I can have you walk threw the door and trip on your face, and then get up and start training with Cole, then Cole could make you out to look like a full on ass. but as for writing it, the RP was good and easy to read, I honestly liked it,
And as for me taking advantage of you, No worries I wont do anything like that... You will se in my next post, but yea the writing is good on it, just make sure not to leave your char open to getting taken advantage of, ok!
Frankie.B[/b][/color]
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HELP?
Jul 23, 2011 13:31:27 GMT -5
Post by Jeff Purse on Jul 23, 2011 13:31:27 GMT -5
ah yes, very good advice indeed, thanks for that. Ha, I hadn't even thought about that.
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Jul 23, 2011 13:45:15 GMT -5
Post by Cole Blaze on Jul 23, 2011 13:45:15 GMT -5
Well like I said Im not going to do it to you, It would be a dirty shot, But that dont mean that it couldnt have been done,
but for the rest of it, I liked it!
Frankie.B[/b][/color]
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